Revisions

 

I changed the cover story that is featured in my cover because that's name of my feature article. The cover story is now the "evolution of the beauty industry".

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I changed the font of the title of my article so that it would appear bolder and more prominent as a title heading. I also justified my columns in my revision and made the image on the second page touch the top margin so that a line of text wouldn't be hanging above the text and then continue below the text. I also added information to the article in order to fill up the space at the end of the page.

I added a second photo to the lower right corner of my table of contents